O, Jenny's a' weet, poor body,
Jenny's seldom dry:
She draigl't a' her petticoatie,
Comin thro' the rye!
Comin thro' the rye, poor body,
Comin thro' the rye,
She draigl't a' her petticoatie,
Comin thro' the rye!
Gin a body meet a body
Comin thro' the rye,
Gin a body kiss a body,
Need a body cry?
Gin a body meet a body
Comin thro' the glen,
Gin a body kiss a body,
Need the warl' ken?
Gin a body meet a body
Comin thro' the grain;
Gin a body kiss a body,
The thing's a body's ain.
I really like this poem, hope you enjoy it.
A – 5 Shows an understanding of the character to a certain extent. Some inventiveness employed to highlight Phoebe’s intelligence.
ReplyDeleteB – 5 Generally appropriate register and style. Would benefit from ensuring words are used in English. The structure is good.
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